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Two seasoned feet dance,Careening on a longboard,Between spring and fall.--Brent Logan (2014)
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I ADORE this haiku! I keep reading and rereading and shaking my head at the marvelous ambiguity of the final line! You get an A+!
Thank you so much! Thirty-four years in waiting, I finally get my A+! :-)
I credit my high school English teachers. ;-)
Update. I changed “reveling” to “careening.” Before I posted, I had “descending” there, but that was too dark for my tastes. Careening captures the movement and my lack of control. Besides, it just sounds right. :-)
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I ADORE this haiku! I keep reading and rereading and shaking my head at the marvelous ambiguity of the final line! You get an A+!
Thank you so much! Thirty-four years in waiting, I finally get my A+! :-)
I credit my high school English teachers. ;-)
Update. I changed “reveling” to “careening.” Before I posted, I had “descending” there, but that was too dark for my tastes. Careening captures the movement and my lack of control. Besides, it just sounds right. :-)