Categories longboarding Longboarding Post author By Brent Logan Post date November 22, 2014 3 Comments on Longboarding Two seasoned feet dance, Careening on a longboard, Between spring and fall. —Brent Logan (2014) Tags haiku, longboarding, poetry By Brent Logan Engineer. Lawyer. WordPress geek. Longboarder. Blood donor. Photographer. Ally. More about Brent. View Archive → ← Cool Kid Achievement Unlocked → Thanksgiving Pi-ku 3 replies on “Longboarding” I ADORE this haiku! I keep reading and rereading and shaking my head at the marvelous ambiguity of the final line! You get an A+! Thank you so much! Thirty-four years in waiting, I finally get my A+! :-) I credit my high school English teachers. ;-) Update. I changed “reveling” to “careening.” Before I posted, I had “descending” there, but that was too dark for my tastes. Careening captures the movement and my lack of control. Besides, it just sounds right. :-) Leave a Reply Cancel reply Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *Comment Name * Email * Website Notify me of follow-up comments by email. Notify me of new posts by email.