1. I ADORE this haiku! I keep reading and rereading and shaking my head at the marvelous ambiguity of the final line! You get an A+!

  2. Update. I changed “reveling” to “careening.” Before I posted, I had “descending” there, but that was too dark for my tastes. Careening captures the movement and my lack of control. Besides, it just sounds right. :-)

What do you think?